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This year
This year I fell
in love with a girl
I gave her one heart
She grabbed it,
ripped it, and made it two
I'm glad That I made it through
Maybe next time I should give my heart to not just one girl but two.
The sun is beginning to shine, My heart is beginning to bloom.
in love with a girl
I gave her one heart
She grabbed it,
ripped it, and made it two
I'm glad That I made it through
Maybe next time I should give my heart to not just one girl but two.
The sun is beginning to shine, My heart is beginning to bloom.
Published 17th Nov 2020
Author's Note
Time heals
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17th Nov 2020 3:59am
18th Nov 2020 10:27pm
Thanks for kind compliment. Time does heal yes I agree, but only when and If we choose to heal.
19th Nov 2020 00:14am
17th Nov 2020 12:44pm
Dear R,
For such a painful situation your poem is gently expressed. It’s beautiful and hopeful while healing from such trauma. I do appreciate that. Beautiful write.,
H🌷
For such a painful situation your poem is gently expressed. It’s beautiful and hopeful while healing from such trauma. I do appreciate that. Beautiful write.,
H🌷
18th Nov 2020 10:30pm
Dear H
Thanks for your read and comment.
Healing is one thing I'd learnt so far so good this year.
Thanks for your read and comment.
Healing is one thing I'd learnt so far so good this year.
18th Nov 2020 10:34pm
18th Nov 2020 1:51am
I like the message of strength and optimism. Sometimes you'll never be as appreciated or love won't be as reciprocated as much, but your resilience to move forward will bring you wonders.
Great verse.
Great verse.
18th Nov 2020 10:33pm
Thanks for your read and comment, I'm glad you did liked it.
Sure, I keep moving forward every, I can't settle for less.
Sure, I keep moving forward every, I can't settle for less.
