The Calm Before The Storm

poignant.

this work speaks, deep.

Many thanks, cold_fusion.

Wonderfully realistic. Excellent, Lozzamus.


regards,
buddhakitty.

Many thanks, buddhakitty.  Hope you are well.

They keep coming

Thanks, Jus Tim_

Excellent imagery, Lozzamus.

the village stands empty now
its buldings abandoned
each person swallowed into silence

Just wow.

Thanks very much, Ahavati.  I heard the phrase as musical sounds and trusted my instinct.

Dear L,

Ominous and enthralling at the same time. Sometimes I feel like the universe gets fed up and just purges. Your last stanza is so poignant. I felt a shiver of abandonment thinking of all the changes. Wonderful write full of such imagery. H🌷

Thanks for commenting, Honoria. Much appreciated.

A powerful and poignant poem for this tragic year L.
🙏 Harry

Thanks for commenting, Harry. Hope you are well and safe.

I'm down here in Australia man, we have all but stopped the spread, touch wood. Stay safe up there L.