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Breath Of Beauty
being attractive
is as natural as breath
for she is beauty
is as natural as breath
for she is beauty
Published 10th Nov 2020
Author's Note
For the "She Walks In Beauty" contest
inspired by his poem she walks in beauty
sometimes less is more
inspired by his poem she walks in beauty
sometimes less is more
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10th Nov 2020 11:16am
In this case it most certainly is more. You've done a fabulous job on this!
10th Nov 2020 12:42pm
10th Nov 2020 2:49pm
You are most welcome! You never disappoint me, infact, I'm always in awe of the beauty in what you write. Best of luck to you in the competition!
Anonymous
10th Nov 2020 11:44am
Less can certainly be more. Less cosmetics. Less clothes. Less words .....
AP, glad to see you were inspired by Mister Byron!
AP, glad to see you were inspired by Mister Byron!
10th Nov 2020 12:41pm
10th Nov 2020 12:39pm
10th Nov 2020 12:44pm
Without sounding crass or egotistical i thought i did pretty well myself , which is unusual for me to admit
