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7th Nov 2020 7:51pm
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Re: Re. lust in seventeen syllables
7th Nov 2020 7:53pm
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Re: Re. lust in seventeen syllables
7th Nov 2020 8:37pm
Re. lust in seventeen syllables
9th Nov 2020 9:37pm
You're in a period of terrific intimacy with the all light. It gives me joy as my connection is in a period of wane, to see it's abundance flowing.
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Re: Re. lust in seventeen syllables
9th Nov 2020 10:03pm
Re. lust in seventeen syllables
16th Nov 2020 5:32pm
well done!
"gripped skin demons sing below"
demons can make the greatest music can't they! nice write.
"gripped skin demons sing below"
demons can make the greatest music can't they! nice write.
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Re: Re. lust in seventeen syllables
16th Nov 2020 5:33pm
Re. lust in seventeen syllables
18th Nov 2020 5:14pm
In a few word, tons of lust and intimacy portrayed. Few different interpretations makes it even more exciting.
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Re: Re. lust in seventeen syllables
18th Nov 2020 5:44pm
Re. lust in seventeen syllables
Hello, Beautiful Poetess 🥀
Having read through a number of your well-writ pieces, my eye fell upon this sweet bit of erotica.
Ya know? I've read and written so very many Senryu pieces, but never one that surged though my manly senses as enthralling as yours here. Wonderfully presented, in perfectly arousing ambience, and I especially love the baby blue font in a gorgeous script dancing on its sizzlingly red-lipped bed of sheer poetic succulence.
I thank you ever-so warmly for sharing the sheer wonder of your smooth, irresistible feminine nature, that sooo effectively caresses and tugs at one's own.
You're truly very fine and rare, from looks to skill, so very much enjoyed! ⁓ Richard🖌️
Having read through a number of your well-writ pieces, my eye fell upon this sweet bit of erotica.
Ya know? I've read and written so very many Senryu pieces, but never one that surged though my manly senses as enthralling as yours here. Wonderfully presented, in perfectly arousing ambience, and I especially love the baby blue font in a gorgeous script dancing on its sizzlingly red-lipped bed of sheer poetic succulence.
I thank you ever-so warmly for sharing the sheer wonder of your smooth, irresistible feminine nature, that sooo effectively caresses and tugs at one's own.
You're truly very fine and rare, from looks to skill, so very much enjoyed! ⁓ Richard🖌️
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Re: Re. lust in seventeen syllables
1st May 2022 8:52pm
Re: Re. lust in seventeen syllables
1st May 2022 9:09pm