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Already gone
You left me to walk
This world all alone
But my reason for being
Is already gone
I can't do this
You make me live
Now you've gone away
I'll miss your kiss
Willing to give
Me a reason to wake
But you left me
No choice that I can see
Passed to the other side
Visions that can't be left unseen
Disturbing imagery
Can't block it from my mind
Your face turned blue
I breathed my life in you
But the soul had already gone
I'll search for you
Under the darkest moon
A gutted spirit who'll forever roam
You left me to walk
This world all alone
But my reason for being
Is already gone
This world all alone
But my reason for being
Is already gone
I can't do this
You make me live
Now you've gone away
I'll miss your kiss
Willing to give
Me a reason to wake
But you left me
No choice that I can see
Passed to the other side
Visions that can't be left unseen
Disturbing imagery
Can't block it from my mind
Your face turned blue
I breathed my life in you
But the soul had already gone
I'll search for you
Under the darkest moon
A gutted spirit who'll forever roam
You left me to walk
This world all alone
But my reason for being
Is already gone
Published 7th Nov 2020
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7th Nov 2020 8:15am
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7th Nov 2020 10:03am
Anonymous
- Edited 11th Nov 2020 3:50am
11th Nov 2020 3:49am
This is heart wrenching. I'm so sorry.
Losing someone to death can feel unbearable, at times.
I know its not the same but I can relate...I've been struggling with losing someone near me recently, too.
The scariest part of the aftermath has been (for me, at least) feeling like you don't know what to do, don't know what is normal to do & feel. Then, trying to act normal when all eyes are on you.
Emotionally, it feels all over the place...and no matter how hard you try to keep the feelings at bay, the more they bleed into every single move you make.
At least there is comfort is knowing:
"A heart that's broke, is a heart that's been loved"
My heart hurts with you.
Hugs to you. ❤
Losing someone to death can feel unbearable, at times.
I know its not the same but I can relate...I've been struggling with losing someone near me recently, too.
The scariest part of the aftermath has been (for me, at least) feeling like you don't know what to do, don't know what is normal to do & feel. Then, trying to act normal when all eyes are on you.
Emotionally, it feels all over the place...and no matter how hard you try to keep the feelings at bay, the more they bleed into every single move you make.
At least there is comfort is knowing:
"A heart that's broke, is a heart that's been loved"
My heart hurts with you.
Hugs to you. ❤
11th Nov 2020 9:12am
10th Jul 2021 1:39pm
Very good poem.
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I like the following verses:
"...Visions that can't be left unseen
Disturbing imagery
Can't block it from my mind..."
...
I like the following verses:
"...Visions that can't be left unseen
Disturbing imagery
Can't block it from my mind..."
10th Jul 2021 9:49pm
11th Jul 2021 00:20am
