Senryu - Ardent Desire

This is very good! I like it alot!

Thank you very much, Faithmairee❣ just a tiny titillator.

Yes but it's a very good one!

I like the imagery of flaming fire lips and quenching kisses, and the wonderland --forest.  
Wonderfully written.

Jasmine

So good to see you, Jasmine❣❣ I appreciate very much your read and feedback. I hope all is well with you.

Hot kisses
You say so much in so few words
And always play the perfect chord

Wow, that's an awesome compliment, thank you. To have played the perfect chord is high praise.