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The Bone Core
She had the palest blue lips,
Like the victim of a drowning.
I kept her in jars tied around my waist mostly.
“Samples of my chromosomes, you see!
The meaty parts of them, where the smooth turns of their skeletons collide!”
Sunlight bore across her Christlike back.
She glowed like thermonuclear honey and the velvety skin of off-world aquatic life.
Why am I in this state.
It is a dirty opera,
A beating.
My self is weeping for synthetic concubines and spectral night watchers.
My self is slipping on the rubber suit of time traveling and poisoned tea.
Floorboard walkers of statues and acid and embryonic stem fields -
“You have bruised your feet against my primordial teeth!”
Like the victim of a drowning.
I kept her in jars tied around my waist mostly.
“Samples of my chromosomes, you see!
The meaty parts of them, where the smooth turns of their skeletons collide!”
Sunlight bore across her Christlike back.
She glowed like thermonuclear honey and the velvety skin of off-world aquatic life.
Why am I in this state.
It is a dirty opera,
A beating.
My self is weeping for synthetic concubines and spectral night watchers.
My self is slipping on the rubber suit of time traveling and poisoned tea.
Floorboard walkers of statues and acid and embryonic stem fields -
“You have bruised your feet against my primordial teeth!”
Published 1st Nov 2020
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Anonymous
1st Nov 2020 1:33pm
This is a cornucopia of bizarreness. I like it. There's a pining - almost lusting - to reverse engineer Life back to what it once was.
1st Nov 2020 1:42pm
Yes, agrees with JB... A walk a swim a flowy steady~ slow dissolution unto the Oneness, Unto the Undying Love that magnifies in your poetic romanticisms through the mystical spiritualism & the chaotic overlappanace of tenses unto a timelessness... a dystopian scifi apocalytic seed ...blooming unto a sunning singularity, Life, Love. Is there any Poem poet that comes close to your unique superlativeness mix & breed that you are B... so deeply glad that you are back.. & this time, your spacings & breathing verses are dosing the pithy concentrate of your dense poetics in slow steady pace & penetrating emotives... Shine On Write On B! Best as Ev ..Light & Love :)
B, May I share this fabtab piece of your artistry in POM .. I know all your scribes deserve this.. this is juzt my piece~ peace of respect & honour to your Poetry Eternal that needs to grace~ amaze One & All by your beautiful heartmindbodysoul ev x:)
B, May I share this fabtab piece of your artistry in POM .. I know all your scribes deserve this.. this is juzt my piece~ peace of respect & honour to your Poetry Eternal that needs to grace~ amaze One & All by your beautiful heartmindbodysoul ev x:)
3rd Nov 2020 8:03am
3rd Nov 2020 8:38pm
Dont know how I missed this first time.
Agrees so much with Uma. Perfect lines dripping, oozing with bloodied tendons, briny filaments.
For me definitely POM.
Agrees so much with Uma. Perfect lines dripping, oozing with bloodied tendons, briny filaments.
For me definitely POM.
3rd Nov 2020 8:39pm
3rd Nov 2020 10:09pm
I agree with the previous comments, another dark masterpiece derived from a very unique recipe. A lovely combination in this dirty opera.
13th Nov 2020 11:54am
13th Feb 2021 10:55pm
I love the title for this. This is an awesome read and I had to read it a couple of times. It's haunting.
