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It's You That I Miss
I miss you
I miss your smile,
how it would gracefully sweep
across my day
I miss your beauty and laughter
the way it shines brighter
than any star.
I miss your honor
and integrity
the only thing
in this world
I could ever
count on
All that surrounds
me reminds me,
of how much
I miss you
the rain, the sun, and moon,
the blue sky,
the dark sky,
the storm and
the calm
the blazing heat
and frigid cold
I will always
miss you
I miss your smile,
how it would gracefully sweep
across my day
I miss your beauty and laughter
the way it shines brighter
than any star.
I miss your honor
and integrity
the only thing
in this world
I could ever
count on
All that surrounds
me reminds me,
of how much
I miss you
the rain, the sun, and moon,
the blue sky,
the dark sky,
the storm and
the calm
the blazing heat
and frigid cold
I will always
miss you
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Re. It's You That I Miss
31st Oct 2020 11:16pm
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Thank you dear Poetess
It was written for my husband who suffers the affects of alternate personalities
It's been years since I've seen the man I married
I miss him
It was written for my husband who suffers the affects of alternate personalities
It's been years since I've seen the man I married
I miss him
Re. It's You That I Miss
1st Nov 2020 1:40am
beautiful and devastating V
great write, my favorite kind is when the two above mentioned fuse together in a way they are not supposed to
Thank you for sharing this lil piece of you with all of us
great write, my favorite kind is when the two above mentioned fuse together in a way they are not supposed to
Thank you for sharing this lil piece of you with all of us
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1st Nov 2020 4:25am
Re. It's You That I Miss
1st Nov 2020 1:47am
I truly felt this, Val. It's like you shot an arrow of words into heaven, and it exploded into stars of lament. Just beautiful.
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1st Nov 2020 4:26am
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1st Nov 2020 2:05am
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1st Nov 2020 4:27am
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Dear V,
The presence of loss is felt with each phrase and it called to mind my own losses where some days I can’t turn around without feeling the sting of not having them near anymore. This piece is a touching homage and I’m grateful for your openness to share it. H🌷
The presence of loss is felt with each phrase and it called to mind my own losses where some days I can’t turn around without feeling the sting of not having them near anymore. This piece is a touching homage and I’m grateful for your openness to share it. H🌷
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1st Nov 2020 4:24am
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1st Nov 2020 11:49am
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Anonymous
3rd Nov 2020 11:59am
Heartbre'aching, Val. I pray you find him and peace of soul again.
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3rd Nov 2020 2:56pm