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Mute
He keeps hinting
she keeps assuming.
Circles.
If only he had just said something
she would've had a clue.
Confusion.
instead of speaking he just stared
her ears screamed for sound.
Collapse.
He told her not to leave
she told him goodbye.
she keeps assuming.
Circles.
If only he had just said something
she would've had a clue.
Confusion.
instead of speaking he just stared
her ears screamed for sound.
Collapse.
He told her not to leave
she told him goodbye.
Published 30th Oct 2020
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30th Oct 2020 5:37am
Mute for no reason oft sows confusion ... question is on your part or his? ... Good write ...Bless and love ...
30th Oct 2020 10:04pm
31st Oct 2020 3:52am
Dear N,
I know this conversation all too well. Misinterpretation if there’s any convo in the first place and escalation thereafter. Good times.
Perfectly captured in your write. Well said (and not said 😉)
H🌷
I know this conversation all too well. Misinterpretation if there’s any convo in the first place and escalation thereafter. Good times.
Perfectly captured in your write. Well said (and not said 😉)
H🌷
31st Oct 2020 11:12pm
It may sound cliche but it is about the right way of communication, otherwise things are lost and gone.
Great writing
Great writing
16th Nov 2020 00:47am
