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25th Oct 2020 8:58pm
Dear AP,
Your poem recalls an affair of the heart that makes me yearn for seeing where it might have gone.
Lovely piece. H🌷
Your poem recalls an affair of the heart that makes me yearn for seeing where it might have gone.
Lovely piece. H🌷
25th Oct 2020 9:31pm
Excellent, while love lingers, cause love can be out the door without a moments notice.
Well done.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Well done.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
26th Oct 2020 00:16am
26th Oct 2020 2:36am
While our love lingers
Lets indulge in forbidden
Soul fiery desires
Taking our beautiful
Silhouettes beyond the calling of the stars
As we beautifully collide within the cloak of ecstasy
Mm... this is simply breathless in such a smooth delivery my handsome moonbeam😘
Lets indulge in forbidden
Soul fiery desires
Taking our beautiful
Silhouettes beyond the calling of the stars
As we beautifully collide within the cloak of ecstasy
Mm... this is simply breathless in such a smooth delivery my handsome moonbeam😘
26th Oct 2020 2:39am
26th Oct 2020 2:47am
Ahh... thank you my love...and please enjoy your early morning and may this your day smile upon you and bestow all merciful blessings unto you, always
