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The Art of LosingControl (The Journey Across the Lazy, White River)
I cum, down a lazy, white river
each and every day
by railway
by trail way
by caravan
across Arab sands
effortlessly
drifting on a wanton memory
of you
I cum.....
…..I'm in you
you're in me and I ride
your haunches like a
powerful steed-built to breed
by purpose of design
we are connected
down upon our bended knees,
oh how you please me
the way your intimacy
squeezes me
this wet union of kindred souls
loosing control
a fiercely, undulating locomotion......
….no one can “fuck me” like you do
and the words
hypnotize
seeing with the mind,
my third eye blinded
as the flow from your lips
breaking the silent air,
with lust in refrain
“fuck me”
and the froth of a white river
juxtaposes itself against the hues
of your beautiful, tanned skin
abstract lines and shapes
juices of sensuality
drip from lips
that stand agape.....
…..my lust flows
from your spent lips
etching it's way along the insides
of your thighs, my cum
along this lazy, creamy white river, losing all control
Published 25th Oct 2020
Author's Note
......even in these pandemic times, just to "fuck" like that 🤩🍆💦
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Anonymous
- Edited 1st Jan 2022 9:45pm
25th Oct 2020 3:37pm
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Thank you.......
.....for allowing the words insiderew, allowing a splendid analysis of words to describe what men feel and what they do
whilst "Insiderew" 😋
.....for allowing the words insiderew, allowing a splendid analysis of words to describe what men feel and what they do
whilst "Insiderew" 😋
Anonymous
- Edited 1st Jan 2022 9:45pm
29th Oct 2020 10:10pm
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25th Oct 2020 4:25pm
Rhyming summary came to mind:
Losing control.....
white rivers roll.
Would not be surprised if a few male readers lose that control reading this!
Losing control.....
white rivers roll.
Would not be surprised if a few male readers lose that control reading this!
25th Oct 2020 5:33pm
Well King, if the words stimulate one to the point of an action (or reaction) then it's poetic verse has accomplished it's goal 🍆💦🍑
26th Oct 2020 6:36am
There have been at least two poems (written by others) here that have had that effect on me, call it my body giving them its highest praise. Yours made me rise to occasion but stopped short.....
26th Oct 2020 2:47am
Excellent write. A beautiful tribute. Love the artwork too. Thanks for sharing. Haven't been here for some time reading. My first read...
26th Oct 2020 4:51am
2nd Nov 2020 7:28am
Terrific write. You have here lyrical flourishes used before but meshed in a way that truly makes this uniquely yours.
2nd Nov 2020 12:16pm
Thanks Bro. Ted. A very respected comment from a fellow writer and musician :)
