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Lovers' night
Full moon night
Placid sky
Shimmering stars
Silvery light
Sweet floral fragrance
wafts through the air
You and I
hand in hand
walking down the avenue
sweet memories we share
Summer breeze
gently blows
caressing our cheeks
ruffling our hair
Rustling leaves...
Oh...love is in the air!
Closer we draw
Steal a glance
Blush and smile
Our heartbeats prance
Silence pervades
Our eyes talk
Wrapping each other
in a warm embrace
seal our love with a sweet lip-lock...
Placid sky
Shimmering stars
Silvery light
Sweet floral fragrance
wafts through the air
You and I
hand in hand
walking down the avenue
sweet memories we share
Summer breeze
gently blows
caressing our cheeks
ruffling our hair
Rustling leaves...
Oh...love is in the air!
Closer we draw
Steal a glance
Blush and smile
Our heartbeats prance
Silence pervades
Our eyes talk
Wrapping each other
in a warm embrace
seal our love with a sweet lip-lock...
Author's Note
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25th Oct 2020 10:02am
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25th Oct 2020 10:19am
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25th Oct 2020 10:21am
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25th Oct 2020 10:27am
Hey, thank you so much for the great review. I'm so honoured by the RL add, Mahesh. 😊
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25th Oct 2020 11:20am
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25th Oct 2020 12:33pm
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25th Oct 2020 2:21pm
Thanks a lot, dear poet for the great comment and the RL add. Very much appreciate you stopping by. 😊
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25th Oct 2020 12:42pm
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25th Oct 2020 2:48pm
Dear I,
The romance of this is so beautiful.
“ You and I
hand in hand
walking down the avenue
sweet memories we share”
I really love the imagery and the thoughtfulness behind this phrase. It’s so intimate. Lovely write. H🌷
The romance of this is so beautiful.
“ You and I
hand in hand
walking down the avenue
sweet memories we share”
I really love the imagery and the thoughtfulness behind this phrase. It’s so intimate. Lovely write. H🌷
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25th Oct 2020 2:54pm
Aah, it's so good to see you, dear poetess, gracing my page with your thoughtful n lovely comments.
Thanks a lot for the visit. 😊🌹
Thanks a lot for the visit. 😊🌹
Re. Lovers' night
25th Oct 2020 4:06pm
I was about to ask you if you'd posted this before, then I read your note. I remember reading it and felt the deja vu all throughout it! Thanks for validating my intuition this morning, Rohini! xo
It's wonderful to see it again. And the same image too?
It's wonderful to see it again. And the same image too?
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25th Oct 2020 4:17pm
I'm again suffering from writer's block, but wanted to post something... So posted this old piece.
I want to enter the competition based on the great writer Tagore, but haven't been able to pen down anything. :( Anyway, I have been perusing some of his beautiful work... I just hope I'm able to write something before the comp ends.
Thanks a lot, dear Ahavati for your kind support. 😊🌹
I want to enter the competition based on the great writer Tagore, but haven't been able to pen down anything. :( Anyway, I have been perusing some of his beautiful work... I just hope I'm able to write something before the comp ends.
Thanks a lot, dear Ahavati for your kind support. 😊🌹
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25th Oct 2020 4:23pm
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25th Oct 2020 4:28pm
I wondered if you were going to enter. I was hoping to see entries from you and Uma, being you're both Indian and have that mystic vibe about your auras.
Listen, just keep reading Tagore until an essence resonates with your own experience. That's when you make it your own. You have time yet.
xo
Listen, just keep reading Tagore until an essence resonates with your own experience. That's when you make it your own. You have time yet.
xo
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25th Oct 2020 4:29pm
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25th Oct 2020 7:19pm
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Heyyy buddy, so glad you liked it. :)
Thank you for your gracious words... brought a smile on my face...😊🌷
Thank you for your gracious words... brought a smile on my face...😊🌷
Re. Lovers' night
26th Oct 2020 2:15am
Damn great poem, let your emotions out. Making me gooey and mushy. Keep on writing.
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26th Oct 2020 9:38am
Thank you so much, for the uplifting review. Very much appreciate your presence, dear poet 😊
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27th Oct 2020 6:13pm
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