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THOR'S HAMMER
Dark sharp pounds I feel in this tormenting night
More I suffer as I see any damn light
A war between Thor and Loki have begun a fight
Hammering and lightning flashes that hurt with shadows might...
Neither is winning for they only provoke my eyes to strain as I hold my head tight.....
It's my "LEFT SIDE" that kills bleeding my agonizing sight...
The morning starts with a powerful hammer that slams with a "ROAR"......
I SCREAM PLEASE NOOO... THOR!!!!!
YOUR HAMMER NO MORE HAVE MERCY I IMPLORE.....
CRIES I LET DROWN ME TO THE CORE
THOR STOPS THE EVIL PUSHING HIM HARD AT A SHINING DOOR.....
Serene beauty sings like mermaids with his smile I adore...
His Goddess whisper I hear; "NOW REST MY QUEEN MI HERMOSA AMOR"...
More I suffer as I see any damn light
A war between Thor and Loki have begun a fight
Hammering and lightning flashes that hurt with shadows might...
Neither is winning for they only provoke my eyes to strain as I hold my head tight.....
It's my "LEFT SIDE" that kills bleeding my agonizing sight...
The morning starts with a powerful hammer that slams with a "ROAR"......
I SCREAM PLEASE NOOO... THOR!!!!!
YOUR HAMMER NO MORE HAVE MERCY I IMPLORE.....
CRIES I LET DROWN ME TO THE CORE
THOR STOPS THE EVIL PUSHING HIM HARD AT A SHINING DOOR.....
Serene beauty sings like mermaids with his smile I adore...
His Goddess whisper I hear; "NOW REST MY QUEEN MI HERMOSA AMOR"...
Published 22nd Oct 2020
Author's Note
A SONNET ABOUT A BAD MIGRAINE I HAD LAST NIGHT OCT 21 TILL TODAY OCT 22 2020
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22nd Oct 2020 9:39pm
Sorry about your migraine. I thought this poem about sex, Lol. Hope use Thor's Mighty Hammer, Lol. Keep on writing.
22nd Oct 2020 9:50pm
No there's no room for sex in that sad poem that is very bad about my headache. It's really like that on my left side. Pounding headache. Thanks for liking.
23rd Oct 2020 10:26am
Found peace yet? I hope the thunders do settle and you regain your tranquility.
Much Love ♥
Much Love ♥
24th Oct 2020 1:53pm
Actual peace after work I did... At home things were a tad but better and calm. My headache faded next day after those two awful days
Right now just tired but no headache of any kind thanks to God. Thanks hun....
Right now just tired but no headache of any kind thanks to God. Thanks hun....
18th Nov 2020 2:05am
Nice.
I liked how you ended that couplet in Spanish.
Hope you're feeling better after what sounds like a torturous night.
Excellent form, rhythm and flow Nancy.
I liked how you ended that couplet in Spanish.
Hope you're feeling better after what sounds like a torturous night.
Excellent form, rhythm and flow Nancy.
22nd Nov 2020 1:57am
Thank you wallyroo I do feel so much better cause that was horrible headache tbh but it's cause was lack of hardly sleep and staying up late. I don't want that headache happening again so trying to rest right. Thank you for liking it and yes I figured I'd end it sweet and romantic in Spanish. Thor's voice soothed my agonizing headache and I could rest. Just imagining him with me to help me forget my pain lol
29th Jul 2022 9:51pm
Thank you for this competition entry. I thought they were all stunning! I definitely felt this one... I get them all the bloody time, and also on my left side (is that a Thing?). Usually due to stress levels changing (especially decreasing, damn it!), not sleeping enough, not eating enough, or my neck being messed up.
30th Jul 2022 3:46am
Awww thank you.... And you welcome. Yeah it was a brutal headache. It was a good one and u think I git cause not enough sleep. I paid for it that one dreadful time. Thanks for liking, yea I had to enter that one cause it was real and painful lol
