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Liberated
Once a vivid outline
now a blur
Smudging into the mist of time
memories of you
linger for a while... before
..... Slowly dissipating into the atmosphere
Now, I can see clearly....
now a blur
Smudging into the mist of time
memories of you
linger for a while... before
..... Slowly dissipating into the atmosphere
Now, I can see clearly....
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Re. Liberated
22nd Oct 2020 2:23pm
Re: Re. Liberated
22nd Oct 2020 2:54pm
Thank you so much, dear Ahavati. Glad you liked it. 😊
I'm so honoured by the RL add. 😊🌹
I'm so honoured by the RL add. 😊🌹
Re. Liberated
22nd Oct 2020 4:32pm
Wonderful crisp write dear poetess ... love the varying spacing ... excellent job ...
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Re: Re. Liberated
22nd Oct 2020 5:14pm
Very much appreciate your gracious words and the RL add. Thanks a lot, dear LDF 😊🌹
Re. Liberated
22nd Oct 2020 6:54pm
we can never get back our true bearings in life until we shed all of our tainted skin whether it be personal or intimate. we will always be blinded by the outside influences if we continue to robe our naked minds in their comforts and demands in our daily lives. Great expression and explanation of feeling liberated. I think we should follow each other. Great and awesomely brilliant write my dear poetess.
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Re: Re. Liberated
22nd Oct 2020 9:03pm
Thanks for sharing your thoughts, dear Poet... I do agree with you...
And thanks a bunch for such a great feedback and the RL add. I very much appreciate it 😊🌷
And thanks a bunch for such a great feedback and the RL add. I very much appreciate it 😊🌷
Re. Liberated
22nd Oct 2020 9:26pm
Once you have healed you move on to your next adventure. Keep on writing.
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Re: Re. Liberated
22nd Oct 2020 9:27pm
Re. Liberated
22nd Oct 2020 9:51pm
Let the clouds part and the sun shine forth. Good one InDreamz.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
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Re. Liberated
24th Oct 2020 3:07pm
Oh, such bittersweet feelings, here. I can feel the ache for what is lost, but also the feeling of a great epiphany... a clearing of the fog of the mind, and a light at the end of the darkened tunnel - which will lead you to a better place. Beautiful writing, as always, InDreamz... I loved the metaphor ❤️️
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Re: Re. Liberated
So glad to see that you got the pulse of this piece, dear NB. 😊
Very much appreciate you sharing your valuable thoughts... Much thanks 😊🌷
Very much appreciate you sharing your valuable thoughts... Much thanks 😊🌷