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When I gaze into your eyes...
When I gaze into your eyes,
eyes that define the skies:
I fall deep,
deep into your soul...
Bending space and time,
your eyes a wormhole :
a portal to another dimension ;
a dimension where reality and illusion are unknown...
Gravity of your hypnotic eyes
disintegrating me into nothingness ;
nothingness that has
no beginning or end
Losing in you I find myself
and a realisation of a truth;
the truth—You are Me and I am You
An atom split into two...
Author's Note
Twin flame
Old write
Old write
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Re. When I gaze into your eyes...
21st Oct 2020 9:02pm
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21st Oct 2020 9:06pm
Thank you so much, dearest LDF!
Always love to read your comments. Thanks for your support. 😊🌷
Always love to read your comments. Thanks for your support. 😊🌷
Re. When I gaze into your eyes...
21st Oct 2020 9:05pm
Re: Re. When I gaze into your eyes...
21st Oct 2020 9:07pm
Re. When I gaze into your eyes...
21st Oct 2020 9:13pm
Awwww, new poem of you!!! I am always excited about you... your skills,emotions... are just awesome my dear friend...
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Re: Re. When I gaze into your eyes...
21st Oct 2020 9:15pm
I'm not as good as you though... 😊
Thanks a lot, dear Berke for your kind comments and the RL add. 😊🌹
Thanks a lot, dear Berke for your kind comments and the RL add. 😊🌹
Re: Re. When I gaze into your eyes...
21st Oct 2020 9:18pm
Your vocabulary is better than mine.. the quality of it especially my dearest..
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Re: Re. When I gaze into your eyes...
21st Oct 2020 9:23pm
Re. When I gaze into your eyes...
21st Oct 2020 11:25pm
Beautifully written with love and honor and respect with devotion and understanding of twin spiritual souls nicely composed dear poetess..respect 🤗
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Re: Re. When I gaze into your eyes...
22nd Oct 2020 7:56am
Thanks a ton, dear Stoney. It's so wonderful to see your beautiful comments gracing my page. I'm very much honoured by the RL add. 😊🌷
Re: Re. When I gaze into your eyes...
22nd Oct 2020 10:39am
Respect Dear Poetess and your very welcome I appreciate the love and compliment 🤗🙏😎
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Re. When I gaze into your eyes...
22nd Oct 2020 2:11am
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22nd Oct 2020 7:56am
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22nd Oct 2020 4:56pm
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Re. When I gaze into your eyes...
22nd Oct 2020 7:13pm
I almost feel as if we were gazing at one another through the stars. I love how you made emotions feel like a warm blanket wrapping around my soul around a bonfire looking up into the night sky.
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Re: Re. When I gaze into your eyes...
22nd Oct 2020 8:57pm
Wow, I love your comment, dear Joe. :)
You have a romantic heart.
I love peering into the infinity at night .... There is something about the stars, the moon, and the silence of the beautiful night.... I find solace gazing at the celestial beings....
Thanks for the kind words... Your comment isn't less than a poetry. :)
You have a romantic heart.
I love peering into the infinity at night .... There is something about the stars, the moon, and the silence of the beautiful night.... I find solace gazing at the celestial beings....
Thanks for the kind words... Your comment isn't less than a poetry. :)
Re: Re. When I gaze into your eyes...
22nd Oct 2020 9:06pm
I also have a piece called Infinity that is just lying in my poetry closet on the top shelf just waiting for someone to recapture it's beauty. I do believe you are the one who should bring it back to life
Infinity
Infinity
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Re: Re. When I gaze into your eyes...
24th Oct 2020 9:07am
Re. When I gaze into your eyes...
24th Oct 2020 3:02pm
Gorgeous and lovely, InDreamz. You are a talented writer, and you captured some powerful and passionate emotions in this awesome and clever little spill. Beautiful 🌹
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Re: Re. When I gaze into your eyes...
24th Oct 2020 5:27pm
Thank you so much, dear NB for making my evening with your kind and encouraging words. Its always a matter of great pleasure to see you gracing my page with your motivating and thoughtful words. 😊🌹
Re: Re. When I gaze into your eyes...
24th Oct 2020 5:29pm
You are welcome... I'm always happy to return here to see new writings by you :). This one was super romantic and sweet <3. Keep up the writing!
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Re: Re. When I gaze into your eyes...
24th Oct 2020 5:33pm
Hey, thanks :).... This was an old piece though... Writer's block doesn't seem to spare me... :(
Re: Re. When I gaze into your eyes...
24th Oct 2020 5:35pm
Old or not, it's new for me to read :). I know that feeling all too well. I hope you find your way out of your block soon, heh.
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Re. When I gaze into your eyes...
Normally love from the heart and soul is enough; but now you have physics too! You are golden.
Enjoyed your write - made me feel like I was there, and wouldn't be escaping your gaze. A touching an intimate poem.
Enjoyed your write - made me feel like I was there, and wouldn't be escaping your gaze. A touching an intimate poem.
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Re: Re. When I gaze into your eyes...
9th Jan 2021 9:59am
Yeah, I love physics 😊😊😊
Thanks for a great review, dear Leo. Love Reading your comments. It's an absolute delight to have you on my page. :)
Thanks for a great review, dear Leo. Love Reading your comments. It's an absolute delight to have you on my page. :)