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Wizard Eyes
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I got a beat now motherfucker
I'm gonna lose my beat now motherfucker
Gonna drop my shit now motherfucker
Like its spaghetti
Forget my beat like an alternative alcoholic elephant with Alzheimer's
The voices in my head running amok
If you're running with me you got bad luck
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I got a beat now motherfucker
And I cant pull it from my brain
A membrane
Got me feeling so lame
Stuck in a different plane
I'd rather be Jane
Found dead without ID
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You cant back me up with this fucking beat
I'm unstable
Unstoppable
Undeniable, undefinable, undefiable, undefeatable
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I told you once
I'm the Mastodon
And I told you I come real fast on
The dumb taints who cant spit worth shit but look down on
Me cause I
SEE!
I got a beat now motherfucker
I'm gonna lose my beat now motherfucker
Gonna drop my shit now motherfucker
Like its spaghetti
Forget my beat like an alternative alcoholic elephant with Alzheimer's
The voices in my head running amok
If you're running with me you got bad luck
See See See See See See See See See See See See See See
I got a beat now motherfucker
And I cant pull it from my brain
A membrane
Got me feeling so lame
Stuck in a different plane
I'd rather be Jane
Found dead without ID
See See See See See See See See See See See See See See
You cant back me up with this fucking beat
I'm unstable
Unstoppable
Undeniable, undefinable, undefiable, undefeatable
See See See See See See See See See See See See See See
I told you once
I'm the Mastodon
And I told you I come real fast on
The dumb taints who cant spit worth shit but look down on
Me cause I
SEE!
Published 20th Oct 2020
Author's Note
I know the repetitive "see's" can be can be hard to read but I felt it was the only way to convey what I was actually hearing at the time.
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20th Oct 2020 9:05pm
Hey Reborn-Asylum,
This is a bad-ass line: "Forget my beat like an alternative alcoholic elephant with Alzheimer's"
However, it would have made my brain go gravy if the next line was: "(Dumb) voices in my (trunk) running amok"
:)
This is a bad-ass line: "Forget my beat like an alternative alcoholic elephant with Alzheimer's"
However, it would have made my brain go gravy if the next line was: "(Dumb) voices in my (trunk) running amok"
:)
21st Oct 2020 2:16am
Thank you, I'm not sure if I want the feel to go that way but perhaps I'll play with it, thank you for the insight ^_^
