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Anonymous
20th Oct 2020 1:02am
Love this, Kumar. It needs a title!
20th Oct 2020 1:04am
Thanks. It was originally one of three "TRUSS" poems I posted together, but I didn't think the other two lived up to it. I supposed I could call it TRUSS.
Anonymous
20th Oct 2020 1:17am
Truss works for me! [thumbsup]
20th Oct 2020 4:40pm
Dear K,
I enjoyed the perspective of your write, and how you admired even the walk of your subject. Lust and lusty feelings have their spotlight but truly appreciating someone even for their walk is the ultimate. Lovely write.
H 🌷
I enjoyed the perspective of your write, and how you admired even the walk of your subject. Lust and lusty feelings have their spotlight but truly appreciating someone even for their walk is the ultimate. Lovely write.
H 🌷
20th Oct 2020 6:11pm
