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Senryu - As In Deep Space
Same galaxy shared
by light years separated
why don't we ever talk?
by light years separated
why don't we ever talk?
Published 19th Oct 2020
Author's Note
When the inevitable is inevitable why delay...converse!
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26th Oct 2020 5:41pm
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30th Oct 2020 11:57pm
I agree wholeheartedly. I love how you said so much in so few words. It speaks volumes! Brilliant spill!
1st Nov 2020 8:06am
Thank you, Faith. The Senryu/Haiku style is one of my favorites for the exact reasons you describe. Thanks for the RL as well.
1st Nov 2020 8:18am
It was my pleasure! You did great! I am a firm believer in brevity when it comes to poetry. I am told that is the mark of a great writer. Bravo, dear poetess, bravo!
