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Re. Be my friend
14th Oct 2020 11:06am
Sometimes they are better than people who are fake as they smile in your face nicely done poetess..respect 🤗🙏😎👁👊👊👊
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Re. Be my friend
14th Oct 2020 12:45pm
Re. Be my friend
Anonymous
14th Oct 2020 1:10pm
Awwww. Succinct. You can get used to anything with the right conditioning.
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Re. Be my friend
14th Oct 2020 2:38pm
You have people here who are wlling to listen. People are somtimes fake, but if you find the right person it will be ok. Keep on writing.
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Re. Be my friend
14th Oct 2020 3:05pm
I've always said if there are ghost they are more scared of me than I would be of them hehe 👻
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Re. Be my friend
15th Oct 2020 4:07am
Dear ID,
True, we’ll find company where we can in times of supreme loneliness. I really appreciate how powerful your poem is within its brevity. Well done. H🌷
True, we’ll find company where we can in times of supreme loneliness. I really appreciate how powerful your poem is within its brevity. Well done. H🌷
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Re. Be my friend
15th Oct 2020 11:47am
Re. Be my friend
17th Oct 2020 9:12pm
The imagery is very reflective of the sentiment.
So nice to see you back, Rohini. xo
So nice to see you back, Rohini. xo
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Re: Re. Be my friend
17th Oct 2020 9:49pm
Thank you so much, dear Ahavati.
I'm, too, glad to be back here.
Hope you are doing good.
😊🌷
I'm, too, glad to be back here.
Hope you are doing good.
😊🌷
Re. Be my friend
19th Oct 2020 11:28am
Re: Re. Be my friend
19th Oct 2020 12:06pm
Yeah, their presence will surely kill off our loneliness... Lol
Thanks a lot for a great review.
and Welcome to DUP 😊🌷
Thanks a lot for a great review.
and Welcome to DUP 😊🌷
Re. Be my friend
22nd Oct 2020 7:17pm
sometimes the only true way to feel comfortable and loved is when you are in the presents of a ghost. they do have a warm side to their cold air.
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Re: Re. Be my friend
22nd Oct 2020 8:50pm
Re: Re. Be my friend
22nd Oct 2020 8:58pm
Yes you could say so in a way but not in the sense of life and death but more along the lines of spiritual. I also wrote a piece about this called Afterlife. I believe that is the title. It is a great piece for inspiration and motivation. If you ever do feel the need to read it.
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Re: Re. Be my friend
22nd Oct 2020 8:59pm
Re. Be my friend
25th Jun 2022 6:47am
Re. Be my friend
13th Sep 2022 2:43pm
You have something very powerful here. It brings forth a highly complex feeling. A feeling I have felt before. The company of ghosts. Is a gripping metaphor for loneliness. It has room to be expanded into prose. It felt like a line from a story.
I chose to be a creep and look through your older poems. I stopped at this one because it resonated with me deeply.
'But now I'm so lonely
I enjoy their company'
Magic!
Regards
James
I chose to be a creep and look through your older poems. I stopped at this one because it resonated with me deeply.
'But now I'm so lonely
I enjoy their company'
Magic!
Regards
James
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Re: Re. Be my friend
20th Sep 2022 12:51pm
Hi! Sorry for the late response, dear James... I had not been well.
I'm sorry to hear that you have experienced that feeling mentioned here in this piece.
These lines just popped up in my mind in one of those moments of life when it felt that i was sucked in the cavity of the vortex of loneliness n hopelessness.
Thank you so much, dear poet for checking out my work 😊 highly appreciate it ❤
I'm sorry to hear that you have experienced that feeling mentioned here in this piece.
These lines just popped up in my mind in one of those moments of life when it felt that i was sucked in the cavity of the vortex of loneliness n hopelessness.
Thank you so much, dear poet for checking out my work 😊 highly appreciate it ❤
Re: Re. Be my friend
21st Sep 2022 12:43pm
Hi,
I hope you feel better soon. My cure is one lemon squeezed into a cup diluted with water. It's a Vitamin C injection.
It gave me strenght to know someone else has been there.
Take it easy friend
James
I hope you feel better soon. My cure is one lemon squeezed into a cup diluted with water. It's a Vitamin C injection.
It gave me strenght to know someone else has been there.
Take it easy friend
James
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Re: Re. Be my friend
21st Sep 2022 12:48pm
Yeah, I'm better now. I had dengue.
Oh, I drink that empty stomach in the morning 😊 though have not been drinking that lately.
We aren't aware but I guess a lot of people have been there. Hope life is treating you well now, friend.
Thanks for the reply.
Oh, I drink that empty stomach in the morning 😊 though have not been drinking that lately.
We aren't aware but I guess a lot of people have been there. Hope life is treating you well now, friend.
Thanks for the reply.