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Peaked At The Descend Of My Fall
Written by
SweetKittyCat5
Published 10th Oct 2020
Author's Note
I wanted to do a visual with mountain peaks.. One Of Three
SKC
SKC
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Re. Peaked At The Descend Of My Fall
10th Oct 2020 8:59pm
I love this image so much. You know how I try so hard to fit everything into 5/7/5 lines. So here is how it ends up in my head that way:
"Set upon the peaks
of Mt. Everest by you,
only to look down"
I don't always like it when people take liberty with my words, so I apologize for that. Just wanted to let you know my experience, reading this.
"Set upon the peaks
of Mt. Everest by you,
only to look down"
I don't always like it when people take liberty with my words, so I apologize for that. Just wanted to let you know my experience, reading this.
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Re: Re. Peaked At The Descend Of My Fall
10th Oct 2020 9:40pm
Ahh.. I will take that beautiful insight to heart my love and I bow to the character of your reverence, I must truly thank you for taking the time to visit my canvass. Please enjoy the rest of your Saturday and may a great evening greet your presence as well😘
Re. Peaked At The Descend Of My Fall
10th Oct 2020 10:08pm
Re: Re. Peaked At The Descend Of My Fall
11th Oct 2020 3:11am
Ahh.. thank you my friend, when I can get a 'speechless' out of anyone it is a blessing in disguise. Therefore, I am wishing you a great evening and a blessed approaching Sunday as well
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11th Oct 2020 5:34am
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Re. Peaked At The Descend Of My Fall
1st Mar 2021 11:08pm
This one resonates deep; I feel 2 days ago before I wrote "climb and crumple" your poem would have had little to no impact. It's because I was not in that thought process, nothing against your poetry. The feeling being shared with yours is how I felt writing that poem. I felt fury. Poetry like this makes me want to set time out to write. I don't really care to share much with my comments, but I got a lot of emotion out on my poem. Reading yours just really got me in a good way and makes me appreciate poetry. Thanks for liking my first share.
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Re: Re. Peaked At The Descend Of My Fall
2nd Mar 2021 2:04am
You've earned that merit of reverence my friend, keep smiling and keep shining, whatever you do here, stay true to your craft and never allow anyone to make you doubt yourself, and please enjoy the remainder of your evening my poet