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smile
Smiles are the most deceitful expressions of them all.
I smile when I'm happy,
I smile when I'm sad,
I smile when I'm angry,
and I smile when I'm mad.
You see a smile on the outside and instantly think I'm happy,
but external lenses are far too narrow to show what's true.
What if I have tears running down my face on the inside?
I smile when I'm happy,
I smile when I'm sad,
I smile when I'm angry,
and I smile when I'm mad.
You see a smile on the outside and instantly think I'm happy,
but external lenses are far too narrow to show what's true.
What if I have tears running down my face on the inside?
Published 8th Oct 2020
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8th Oct 2020 3:38pm
This has potential to be something riveting and lasting. It needs more character for that. A comparative could help the smile shine more deceitfully.
8th Oct 2020 3:40pm
I 100% agree with your feedback thank you for helping me reach my potential!!
