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Response to a Crit
Poetic admonitions
Such suppositions
Inside my head you read my thoughts
For as your plea is writ
I sit
Simultaneously perusing past the old poem
You were using
To write your call for more
And when
I submitted my rewrite of that poem
with your words still in my head
I realized just then
That another newer poem was due
and so I bid
patience to you
For it will cum
But it's fits and spurts to start
While renewing the permissions
I must grant my poetic heart
And deleting any inhibitions
That my creativity might impose
To continue
Creatively
My unrestrained poetry and prose.
Such suppositions
Inside my head you read my thoughts
For as your plea is writ
I sit
Simultaneously perusing past the old poem
You were using
To write your call for more
And when
I submitted my rewrite of that poem
with your words still in my head
I realized just then
That another newer poem was due
and so I bid
patience to you
For it will cum
But it's fits and spurts to start
While renewing the permissions
I must grant my poetic heart
And deleting any inhibitions
That my creativity might impose
To continue
Creatively
My unrestrained poetry and prose.
Published 1st Oct 2020
Author's Note
A DUP member responded to a (sex-themed) poem of mine with a poem they wrote. This was my response to their poetic critique and I didn't want it to get lost and forgotten about, so I'm posting it as a new poem.
I don't know if it is really "extreme content," but since it had the word "cum" in it, I felt i should shelter it from younger audiences that may be casually perusing recent poems.
I don't know if it is really "extreme content," but since it had the word "cum" in it, I felt i should shelter it from younger audiences that may be casually perusing recent poems.
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