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Enchanted Deceit
Have I fallen in love
with the real you?
is your hand a mere glove?
loving gaze untrue?
should I too don a mask
play the smitten, pretend
our passion, desires match
joined flesh an ordained blend?
still the needle on my compass
points in your direction
I’ll worship you in sacred mass
dine on your deception
believe your every amorous word
though I know them to be fiction
my truth thought clear
by obsession blurred
you’ve become my new religion
with the real you?
is your hand a mere glove?
loving gaze untrue?
should I too don a mask
play the smitten, pretend
our passion, desires match
joined flesh an ordained blend?
still the needle on my compass
points in your direction
I’ll worship you in sacred mass
dine on your deception
believe your every amorous word
though I know them to be fiction
my truth thought clear
by obsession blurred
you’ve become my new religion
Published 29th Sep 2020
Author's Note
Inspired by a song challenge between poets. This was the suggested song muse, I enjoy learning of new music from this younger poet with more eclectic musical taste.
"Religion" by Isak Danielson
https://youtu.be/Xc618xkd4zc
"Religion" by Isak Danielson
https://youtu.be/Xc618xkd4zc
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30th Sep 2020 00:34am
30th Sep 2020 5:05am
Wow, where have you been, Jackie. Good to see your name again. I am pleased that you like the poem enough to list it. I hope all is well.
1st Oct 2020 4:08am
It’s always good to see your ink ❤️
I am well , I hope all is well with you too dear friend
Love you
Jackie xx🤗❤️
I am well , I hope all is well with you too dear friend
Love you
Jackie xx🤗❤️
2nd Oct 2020 00:13am
Beautiful writing, you really captured how you can fall in love with someone only to find out they are someone else but you cannot let go. Love it.
2nd Oct 2020 2:40am
Thank you, dear Kristina❣❣ You understand me so well. I appreciate the read, the comment, and inspiration 😘
16th Oct 2020 11:30pm
17th Oct 2020 4:55pm
Thank you so much, Berke! I am pleased you like the poem and I am encouraged by your kind words.
31st Oct 2020 00:03am
This is so powerful! I love everything about this poem. I can't praise it enough. I really enjoyed it.
1st Nov 2020 8:03am
1st Nov 2020 8:22am
Like it? No, I love it! It is extremely well written. I think it's brilliant! You did great!
