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Not amused
The Muse
Was not amused
Her patience was at limit,
Stretched and abused
With such a vocabulary
Straight out of the gutter
Trash and ordure.
And most displeasing
For her hears ro endure
And certainly
Most displeasing
To her lofty aims.
He was, in her eyes,
losing lots of grounds
And making no gain.
Was not amused
Her patience was at limit,
Stretched and abused
With such a vocabulary
Straight out of the gutter
Trash and ordure.
And most displeasing
For her hears ro endure
And certainly
Most displeasing
To her lofty aims.
He was, in her eyes,
losing lots of grounds
And making no gain.
Published 24th Sep 2020
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24th Sep 2020 7:59pm
I very much like this, Viking.
Especially:
"He was, in her eyes,
losing lots of grounds
And making no gain"
Such disappointment, indeed.
Especially:
"He was, in her eyes,
losing lots of grounds
And making no gain"
Such disappointment, indeed.
24th Sep 2020 9:22pm
24th Sep 2020 11:34pm
The disappointments of life. Never ending.
Good write Viking.
regards,
buddhakitty.
Good write Viking.
regards,
buddhakitty.
24th Sep 2020 11:48pm
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