Making Me Work

Holly fuck whoever he is thats one lucky fucker.
Fan on, cool down, deep breaths Ron...breath boy breath

That my dear was fucking awesomelove and light and a touch of jealousy
Ron

Feeding your hungers - smiles

Great piece it didnt feed me it made me ravenous
Loved it
Ron xx

Wow such sweet tender words you feed upon your canvas that need to be filled to all thy sweeten pleasure filled

fill fulled - smiles

Nice submission ... bravo Sweet O ...

merci

Very very nuce piece of ass.  Very nice fuck.

thx

Very hot  poem.  This is one lucky person.  Keep on writing.

glad he enjoyed - smiles

another stirring piece....

not shaken sir?

This made me smile. You put wit into sex like no other writer I've read. Love the sassy language here and how it adds to the overall effect. There is erotic power in your verse that is undeniable.

XoXoXo
John

thank you for sharing your diverse impressions sir

Everyone deserves an honest days work!  : )

Enjoyed the words and the premise.

glad you liked my premises