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Until You Leave

can you feel your heart beat
when sitting all alone
breathing in and breathing out,
alone without a phone

like a newborn entering
a world with no control
awash in new sensations
but yet to know a LOL

can you see your aura
radiating all around
no longer just your body
can you hear the sound

of silence as your thoughts fade
whispering away
quieter and quieter
never do they stay

can you feel the presence
of someone there with you
someone whose vibrations
are synchronizing too
Written by bcpoet (Lawrence)
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