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that day in the frozen food section
...our eyes
met
Written by
buddhakitty
Published 13th Sep 2020
Author's Note
For the brief but beautiful comp.
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Re. that day in the frozen food section
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13th Sep 2020 00:45am
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13th Sep 2020 1:04am
Re. that day in the frozen food section
13th Sep 2020 00:48am
Don't matter where...
don't matter when
Just as long as true love
prevails... Nature will find a way...hugs. Ely
don't matter when
Just as long as true love
prevails... Nature will find a way...hugs. Ely
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13th Sep 2020 1:03am
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13th Sep 2020 3:10am
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13th Sep 2020 3:59am
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13th Sep 2020 2:23pm
I love the open-endedness to this, BK. I read a short-story once ( and have experienced a likeness to it ) about a man crossing a bridge in Paris, I believe. He spotted a women crossing from the other side, and their eyes locked up until they passed one another. He said it was one of the most romantic, erotic moments he had ever experienced, and he would never forget it.
That is what this reminds me of. <3
That is what this reminds me of. <3
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Re. that day in the frozen food section
13th Sep 2020 8:22am
Dear BK,
Okay. I vote you win for the brief comp. This is fabulous.
But, cliff hanger! Now I need you to enter full story comp because I’m hooked! What happened at the deli counter? Omg! What did you do in the cereal aisle? You know that section is a hotbed of attraction and emotional surges!
How often, when I was younger there was a produce manager at the local market who was totally hot! I would spend hundreds on veggies I never ate just to gaze upon him. I’m not kidding I love this. It’s absolutely awesome. H🌷
Okay. I vote you win for the brief comp. This is fabulous.
But, cliff hanger! Now I need you to enter full story comp because I’m hooked! What happened at the deli counter? Omg! What did you do in the cereal aisle? You know that section is a hotbed of attraction and emotional surges!
How often, when I was younger there was a produce manager at the local market who was totally hot! I would spend hundreds on veggies I never ate just to gaze upon him. I’m not kidding I love this. It’s absolutely awesome. H🌷
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Re: Re. that day in the frozen food section
13th Sep 2020 9:55am
What happened next is left up to the reader's imagination...lol ( the only clue is brief but beautiful).
Thank you for the vote of confidence though.
hugs,
buddhakitty
Thank you for the vote of confidence though.
hugs,
buddhakitty
Re. that day in the frozen food section
13th Sep 2020 10:16pm
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13th Sep 2020 10:29pm
Thank you, Lozzamus. Much appreciated.
Hope all is well in your corner of the world.
hugs,
buddhakitty .
Hope all is well in your corner of the world.
hugs,
buddhakitty .
Re. that day in the frozen food section
14th Sep 2020 5:43pm
minimalist gem... & love the loadedness of the striking metaphors so literally spelt.. so raw & existential & breathing romance & essentially elevating.. love the spaces that digs more.. winner entry & best fr the comp! Light & Love dear adored BK :)
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14th Sep 2020 6:47pm
Re. that day in the frozen food section
1st Oct 2020 1:41am
The eyes. The mirrors of the soul..........as long as nobody freezes and loses the moment...............Kisses, Robert.
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1st Oct 2020 1:44am