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SKYLINES, a collab with Eerie
I love you in this
yellow-stained pink-sunned smoke-smudged
echo of a world
The place where ash and
twilight collapse upon the
Western rose skyline.
yellow-stained pink-sunned smoke-smudged
echo of a world
The place where ash and
twilight collapse upon the
Western rose skyline.
Published 9th Sep 2020
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9th Sep 2020 8:57pm
this is such a beautiful and smudged and dingy and glorious image.
well done, the two of you!
well done, the two of you!
9th Sep 2020 9:00pm
9th Sep 2020 10:03pm
It's fabulous to see our comment/reply hodge-podge put together. I didn't realize how much I've missed our haiku "stories". I love it.
9th Sep 2020 10:23pm
They were great. We do have a really complimentary way of writing. I haven't been writing much lately, but perhaps it is awakening again...
9th Sep 2020 10:45pm
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10th Sep 2020 6:47pm
9th Sep 2020 11:34pm
Beautiful. Another comment-born collab. I think you bring it out in us....
10th Sep 2020 6:47pm
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10th Sep 2020 7:41am
Dear S and E,
Well done. You’re blended voices sing as one. I very much enjoyed the colors describing a less than perfect world with a less than perfect person. And we all know two “less than’s” make it perfect. Lovely write. H🌷
Well done. You’re blended voices sing as one. I very much enjoyed the colors describing a less than perfect world with a less than perfect person. And we all know two “less than’s” make it perfect. Lovely write. H🌷
10th Sep 2020 6:50pm
We both write the poetic version of kintsugi - using gold to fill in the cracks from having broken.
20th Sep 2020 00:00am
I like this you guys.. nicely done.!. collaboration in poetry is something I'd love to see more of... perhaps partake in...
22nd Sep 2020 5:47pm
I haven't done much in the way of planned collaboration, but it is certainly fun. Maybe I should!
