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First kiss
One summer night
Moon shining down
Trees casting shadows
Fog setting in
Dog barking in the distance
Girl holding my hand
Heart racing
Palm sweating
Girl leaning
Kiss nearing
Absolute heaven
Moon shining down
Trees casting shadows
Fog setting in
Dog barking in the distance
Girl holding my hand
Heart racing
Palm sweating
Girl leaning
Kiss nearing
Absolute heaven
Published 7th Sep 2020
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7th Sep 2020 8:47pm
Dear KM,
How well you captured and conjured that rush of anticipation of that first kiss! Lovely memories and great descriptives. H🌷
How well you captured and conjured that rush of anticipation of that first kiss! Lovely memories and great descriptives. H🌷
7th Sep 2020 10:34pm
8th Sep 2020 12:56pm
8th Sep 2020 9:11pm
8th Sep 2020 9:17pm
