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Back Where It Started
She glanced at the time on her phone. Her shift would begin in a while. She inhaled hard on the cigarette until stars danced before her eyes and her chest hurt. She shut her eyes. The cigarette was making her dizzy and sick.
Horrible, stinky town.
Even the House looked totally different. A team of builders had ripped out the interior and rebuilt the structure, eradicating all traces of Mum and Dad.
Horrible, stinky town.
Even the House looked totally different. A team of builders had ripped out the interior and rebuilt the structure, eradicating all traces of Mum and Dad.
Published 30th Aug 2020
Author's Note
From a former novel attempt, psychological thriller
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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30th Aug 2020 11:07pm
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1st Sep 2020 00:16am
It is indeed L...I am very well my friend...and I hope all is good up your way.
1st Sep 2020 00:28am
1st Sep 2020 00:54am
31st Aug 2020 1:46am
Dear L,
Funny, reading this I was remembering a friend who’s parents were awful. When they died and another family bought her family house and remodeled it my friend was thrilled. Always so interesting to see how we all relate to situations. Awesome write. H🌷
Funny, reading this I was remembering a friend who’s parents were awful. When they died and another family bought her family house and remodeled it my friend was thrilled. Always so interesting to see how we all relate to situations. Awesome write. H🌷
31st Aug 2020 10:06pm
Thanks for the feedback, Honoria. We respond so differently to things.
I hope you are well, Lawrence.
I hope you are well, Lawrence.
