Commenting Preference:
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Re. White Jeans
26th Aug 2020 3:15pm
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26th Aug 2020 9:02pm
Re. White Jeans
26th Aug 2020 3:36pm
Awesome cant blame him i bet your butt looks awesome in white jeans
Lol
Ron x
Lol
Ron x
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Re: Re. White Jeans
26th Aug 2020 9:03pm
He would be the most
scandalised grand papa in
all France if he knew
So no telling
Smiles
scandalised grand papa in
all France if he knew
So no telling
Smiles
Re: Re. White Jeans
26th Aug 2020 9:03pm
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26th Aug 2020 9:06pm
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26th Aug 2020 9:07pm
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26th Aug 2020 9:13pm
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26th Aug 2020 10:09pm
Re. White Jeans
26th Aug 2020 3:40pm
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26th Aug 2020 9:01pm
Re. White Jeans
26th Aug 2020 5:23pm
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26th Aug 2020 9:04pm
Re. White Jeans
27th Aug 2020 7:32pm
The erotic has a sweet spot I think, considering that it is largely a psychological arousal, and I think a touch of the taboo, a bit of detail, without becoming ribald, falls into that category. This has a subtle, playful eros about it. Check out my write, Fucking and Ambient Interruptions. It occurred to me that the erotic is best when interspersed with intimate asides.
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27th Aug 2020 8:03pm
Re. White Jeans
29th Aug 2020 4:00pm
Quite the first person write! It reminded me of my neighbor who was up on the roof, assisting her bf fixIng a roof in her white jeans!
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31st Aug 2020 12:05pm
Re. White Jeans
29th Aug 2020 4:56pm
Some of the text was hard to see over the white jeans but the poem does highlight the hypocrisy quite well.
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i tried lots of shades
and red was the best fit,
though some is quite smudged
A new picture works better I think
and red was the best fit,
though some is quite smudged
A new picture works better I think
Re. White Jeans
5th Sep 2020 3:26am
What a delightfully naughty poem. You write on any erotic subject emboldened and unrestrained. Your grandpa sounds like a dirty old man. And you are most eager to bring those spanks upon yourself as though more pleasure than punishment.
XoXoXo
John
XoXoXo
John
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Re. White Jeans
5th Sep 2020 7:20am