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Recently dumped and revised a few old ones myself. I can relate to dismissing the stepping stones. Beautiful spill, nonetheless 🖤

Thank you for your comment :) I hope your heart is doing okay... xoxo Lots of hugs.

I recently erased my drive, but I have kept my spin on with the dark. The past often sheds the dust, as the dark becomes one's caul.  Perhaps, chicken soup.

better to have loved and lost..

and by the way this was spilled out.. sounds like you really have experienced one of life’s best gifts

true passionate love


Respect

It was quite a time :) Thank you so much

Amazing poem with the power to engage the reader. A++ Thanks for sharing your talent. Peace. oral

Thank you so much. I appreciate your thoughts!! X

Sasha, this is so beautifully told.  The sharing of each other’s bodies between two people in love is such a deep, sensual, soulful experience.  It was heartbreaking to here that this had come and gone in your life.  Here is to you finding your soulmate and rekindling your heart.

Thank you for the write.

Thank you so much. I truly appreciate your kind words. Hopefully I will. My heart yearns for that.

Awing to read, this writing I sense flowed out of a deeply pleasurable relationship, a sexy romanticism. Favourite lines, for depth of feeling they evoke:

raging for release as we fuse our aches

an ache upon ache upon ache

If anything...our sexual intimacy grows stronger
it's so immersive, fun, amazing and explorative [that word brings mind to the title of the poem]

I love how we find time to talk and ask what pleases each other

Thank you so much for your feedback. This piece was so hard to read, especially now we are no longer together. But, hoping to find this same passionate connection, maybe even better, with someone who speaks to my yearning, that ache I mention :)

I appreciate you mentioning your fav lines, too!!

He of whom it was written should consider it a compliment and honouring to have aroused such a frank poetic response and if reading that poem had found him not with someone else he might be tempted to rekindle things.....

I have added this to my RL.

Great hot poem.  Hope you find your special someone soon.  Keep on writing.

Thank you :) I truly hope that I do x

Hot, heavy, seductive and sexy. Great piece just my sort of work
Lucky man im sure he's gutted he is in your past now
Love and light
Ron