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Grudge Fuck
Intense.
Confident.
Dangerous.
Fuck me heels.
Hiked up skirt.
A captive audience
Pauses to take notice of my tattoo
Lust… is a Tease.
Lust... is validation.
An impeccable Namio drawing in the flesh
You watch me like wounded prey
Gaze sliding up my skirt
Thinking I don't know
That my thick, come hither thighs
Just revealed the road to your Promise Land
The zipper of your jeans
Tempted and taut for the dip in my hips
The Yes in my steps.
I'm no Lamb.
You're new here.
The mess I'll make of you.
Tasty destruction
Let me count the ways that I am Not impressed
On each of your trembling fingers
Your feigned conviction betrays.
Crawl to your suffocation
Under spiteful undulation
Enslaved
Under the weight of my grinding hips
Eyes fixed
Surrendered.
Ravaged.
Dismissed.
Confident.
Dangerous.
Fuck me heels.
Hiked up skirt.
A captive audience
Pauses to take notice of my tattoo
Lust… is a Tease.
Lust... is validation.
An impeccable Namio drawing in the flesh
You watch me like wounded prey
Gaze sliding up my skirt
Thinking I don't know
That my thick, come hither thighs
Just revealed the road to your Promise Land
The zipper of your jeans
Tempted and taut for the dip in my hips
The Yes in my steps.
I'm no Lamb.
You're new here.
The mess I'll make of you.
Tasty destruction
Let me count the ways that I am Not impressed
On each of your trembling fingers
Your feigned conviction betrays.
Crawl to your suffocation
Under spiteful undulation
Enslaved
Under the weight of my grinding hips
Eyes fixed
Surrendered.
Ravaged.
Dismissed.
Published 25th Aug 2020
Author's Note
Defaulting to savagery after a heartbreak. A cycle I've yet to break. And so fills a new jar of hearts.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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25th Aug 2020 1:05am
Sometimes it those moments that will test our strength and courage and endurance to withstand the weight of the hurt and pain but I learned that revenge sex sometimes is worth the effort of pain for it will either be the last time you deposit into the account or you will be living in a fantasy of nothing more than thoughts sexual orientation in your heart and soul and mind 🤔😕
25th Aug 2020 5:56am
Ooh yes. I feel that. It's more damaging to allow it to go the distance, in my opinion. Even though this depicts the extent of what I have to offer until the bitterness left from being hurt is purged, it is typically only ever their expectation. I'm a voyeur at heart so for me, teasing is an art and means the High comes more from walking away. Keep them watching, wanting... then close the curtain and move on. One night stands and angry hoenanigans giving my body to some beta because they were within reach, isn't always worth my near inevitable disappointment. A connection, however, IS worth the wait.
25th Aug 2020 10:32am
25th Aug 2020 4:06am
Hell yes, give it everything you got it, til you both can't move no more. Keep on writing.
25th Aug 2020 5:57am
25th Aug 2020 8:43am
Hot, passionate, powerful, sexy and kinda scary
Absolutely love it
Stumbled across this now off to find your other pieces.
Ron xx soon to be fan
Absolutely love it
Stumbled across this now off to find your other pieces.
Ron xx soon to be fan
25th Aug 2020 8:55am
Ah you humble me. I do hope you find something you like :) Thank you for the read.
25th Aug 2020 1:20pm
25th Aug 2020 8:08pm
16th Dec 2020 2:32am
JS83 this arousing erotic write stirs the voyeuristic and exhibitionist demons buried in my past. I can SEE myself EXHIBITING this incredible write as a prescription after my next heartbreak, LOL.... ''You watch me like wounded prey
Gaze sliding up my skirt
Thinking I don't know
That my thick, come hither thighs Just revealed the road to your Promise Land".....you sure know how to seduce the demon voyeur in me, as I droll all over my laptop LOL. You continue to Impress with yet another amazing write! Bravo!!!
Gaze sliding up my skirt
Thinking I don't know
That my thick, come hither thighs Just revealed the road to your Promise Land".....you sure know how to seduce the demon voyeur in me, as I droll all over my laptop LOL. You continue to Impress with yet another amazing write! Bravo!!!
17th Dec 2020 11:27pm
"Revenge is a dish best served cold" doesn't apply here. You want swift revenge against my kind, acting the prey, just to lure the hapless conquest into your lustful trap.
Feeling vindicated, by denying a connection of your prey, as you dismiss them as a one night ride. Your descriptions and flow of words are quite powerful and set a magnificent scene. Your strut into the room, reminded me of Westerns when the gunslinger walks through the batwing doors of the Saloon.
Feeling vindicated, by denying a connection of your prey, as you dismiss them as a one night ride. Your descriptions and flow of words are quite powerful and set a magnificent scene. Your strut into the room, reminded me of Westerns when the gunslinger walks through the batwing doors of the Saloon.
28th Feb 2021 4:48am
Sometimes, swift is kinder.
I like your interpretation and analysis of this piece. Are you familiar with Namio Harukawa? He sets quite the scene himself. I couldn't begin to do his work justice, but I did pull muse from his drawings here.
I love the Western visual.
I like your interpretation and analysis of this piece. Are you familiar with Namio Harukawa? He sets quite the scene himself. I couldn't begin to do his work justice, but I did pull muse from his drawings here.
I love the Western visual.
1st Mar 2021 3:39am
Well written in its poeticness, like in the way you are trying to read the mind of your sex buddy. But I have to ask, what fun do you get out of all this, if any?
1st Mar 2021 5:19am
Oh, not much skill needed in realizing when you have an admirer that isn't hiding it. Looking deliciously dangerous and being watched has a sexual component that I rather enjoy a lot, actually.
1st Mar 2021 9:18pm
I thought you were looking for revenge on your previous partner. I also thought that's what bought on all this 'grude fuck' stuff, lol.
I've been doing a lot of thinking, see. 😉
I've been doing a lot of thinking, see. 😉
Lol, is that some drink that makes you horny? No but I like the poem. It makes me feel uneasy though cos that's what nice girls shouldn't do. I don't know, maybe I would do the same if I could. I'm not meaning to sound sexist at all. 😉
2nd Mar 2021 1:15am
Try though I may from time to time, I don't quite fit in the "Nice Girl" box.
And oh, I dare you to Google him 😝😆
And oh, I dare you to Google him 😝😆
I did look it up actually. Something about facesitting, then I started shaking & didn't want to go any further, lol. Personally, you look like a nice girl in the sense that you are pretty & come across as soft, sensitive & kind. I don't think this is truly who you are. You are upset. You should be on the sofa with me, some wine & me saying, there, there, as I stroke your hair, hugging you tight. 😊
2nd Mar 2021 5:25am
Is that what it is? Hahaha I'll have to remember that. I kid. You're correct that it isn't a constant state of mind, though. I'm not evil. I just have, in the past, had moments where the concerns I give are rather thin and times like the one depicted above are not typical. Recent piece, old inspiration.
5th Mar 2021 1:00am
5th Mar 2021 1:12am
Thank you, Remy. Always pleased when there's relatability, no matter the genre.
5th Mar 2021 6:17am
5th Mar 2021 7:14am
5th Mar 2021 7:18am
Provocative. Favourite lines:
You watch me like wounded prey
Gaze sliding up my skirt
Thinking I don't know
That my thick, come hither thighs
Just revealed the road to your Promise Land [invitation to go there]
You watch me like wounded prey
Gaze sliding up my skirt
Thinking I don't know
That my thick, come hither thighs
Just revealed the road to your Promise Land [invitation to go there]
5th Mar 2021 10:24pm
12th Jun 2021 1:06am
"The mess I'll make of you"
Hermosa you have a way with words.
I love the work💜
Hermosa you have a way with words.
I love the work💜
18th Jul 2021 7:08am
