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Roofless Toms
There was a young lady called Jemia,
Who's name rhymed with messiah
She had a funny feeling
When down crashed her ceiling
But her tomatoes were still there to admire!
by Jemia
Who's name rhymed with messiah
She had a funny feeling
When down crashed her ceiling
But her tomatoes were still there to admire!
by Jemia
Published 18th Aug 2020
Author's Note
today, 18th aug 2020, my ceiling collapsed near my indoor tomato plants.....(:
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21st Aug 2020 12:42pm
Great rhyme with a surprise in every line. Thanks for sharing. Peace. oral
21st Aug 2020 10:06pm
based entirely on a true story! lol! i wrote this about one hour after my ceiling fell in, just literally about 2 minutes before, i was about to water my indoor tomato plants. it would of hit me right on my head! might of knocked some sense into me? (:
