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This thin line
Holding my breath
Between
Mortal lives
&
the witness
of time
Mimic my moves
to prolong this
embrace
Revolving in sequence
we race through
existence
Commanding displacement
as a way to admire
One wish for
Each~other
to know their
perspective
Recalling
the other
Side
pretending to under
stand;
More than one
Lyfe...
Holding my breath
Between
Mortal lives
&
the witness
of time
Mimic my moves
to prolong this
embrace
Revolving in sequence
we race through
existence
Commanding displacement
as a way to admire
One wish for
Each~other
to know their
perspective
Recalling
the other
Side
pretending to under
stand;
More than one
Lyfe...
Published 24th Jan 2012
| Edited 30th Oct 2014
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Anonymous
25th Jan 2012 6:49am
Good write. Almost sounds like a false friendship to me. Or is it someone who is not sure about their place in life, either with a friend or a lover?
25th Jan 2012 11:27pm
this is an interpritaion for a comp. shadow chasing the light... so yes false friends they are, lovers at best lost in the envy of what they can't know...
11th May 2014 3:50am
This reminds me of that moment when you feel alone in a crowded room full of people you love... happens to us all
11th May 2014 4:07am
