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now that the loving's over
you say
you want to
be my friend
now that the
loving’s over
but please-
don’t bother
as you never
treated your
friends any
better than
you ever
treated me
you want to
be my friend
now that the
loving’s over
but please-
don’t bother
as you never
treated your
friends any
better than
you ever
treated me
Published 15th Aug 2020
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Things you would like to say but don't.
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15th Aug 2020 5:13pm
this poem really is amazing. makes you feel something, especially strength. I’ve read & re-read your poem & each time it reaches me on different levels. I see & feel different feelings. Thank you.
15th Aug 2020 5:21pm
16th Feb 2021 11:32pm
Been there..on both sides..lovely poem..something for me to reflect upon..good words
17th Feb 2021 11:02am
