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Sublime time, Divine fire
Her hair is Fire
Like her eyes burning though my soul
To live or die upon her recognition
Last mission into hope and the Divine
Kindly wind back the clocks of Time
So that I might lie in her favor
And more greatly savor
Her countenance so Sublime
Like her eyes burning though my soul
To live or die upon her recognition
Last mission into hope and the Divine
Kindly wind back the clocks of Time
So that I might lie in her favor
And more greatly savor
Her countenance so Sublime
Published 13th Aug 2020
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Tight peace! beautiful.
The piece is beautiful mate! Welcome to DUP. Keep up the good work.
The piece is beautiful mate! Welcome to DUP. Keep up the good work.
13th Aug 2020 5:53pm
26th Aug 2020 2:12pm
Dear R,
Lovely write. So relatable in wanting to be noticed by that special person and the flush of recognition. Well done and welcome to DU. H🌷
Lovely write. So relatable in wanting to be noticed by that special person and the flush of recognition. Well done and welcome to DU. H🌷
Thank you Honoria. I’d write more poems but my notebooks are in storage. These r two I remember by heart. This one was actually written to a girl I was with for a few years that had liked me high school but I had eyes for someone else then. We got together a decade later.
