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Smile again
Help me find my smile again
The love I had for all my friends
The beauty in a newborn day
The warmth inside a sunlit ray
Help me clear my clouded mind
Corroded with the sands of time
Bring back the joy of childhood dreams
When everything was so serene
Help me find the old me
When I wasn't consumed by worry
The love I had for all my friends
The beauty in a newborn day
The warmth inside a sunlit ray
Help me clear my clouded mind
Corroded with the sands of time
Bring back the joy of childhood dreams
When everything was so serene
Help me find the old me
When I wasn't consumed by worry
Published 8th Aug 2020
Author's Note
About dealing with depression and anxiety.
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8th Aug 2020 1:10am
I have had to deal with MDD and OCD all of my life so this poem is particularly meaning to me. I also was addicted to emotional pain. After years of help and finding the right medication, I now enjoy life and have a peace of mind I never thought possible. I loved your poem and could easily relate to it.
8th Aug 2020 2:30am
8th Aug 2020 7:44am
8th Aug 2020 1:44pm
Excellent straight and slant rhymes with this ... the couplets are perfect for this poem ... maintains its rhyme and cadence ...
8th Aug 2020 2:56pm
8th Aug 2020 3:00pm
This so resonates with me... I, too, yearn for the days bygone when life was better... way, way better....
Lovely poem .. Thanks for sharing
Lovely poem .. Thanks for sharing
8th Aug 2020 3:07pm
