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Loss
after loss
there is no replacing
there is a forever void
where they were
no one's hand will ever fit the same
the timber of their voice
an almost inaudible echo
seems so wrong
when one has touched you
in the most profound ways
our mental ability
to hold on
gets blurry too soon
(like that of a newborn
you hold and carry them
until they can walk
memory of their
smallness escapes
before we have time to
acknowledge it)
there is no replacing
there is a forever void
where they were
no one's hand will ever fit the same
the timber of their voice
an almost inaudible echo
seems so wrong
when one has touched you
in the most profound ways
our mental ability
to hold on
gets blurry too soon
(like that of a newborn
you hold and carry them
until they can walk
memory of their
smallness escapes
before we have time to
acknowledge it)
Published 8th Aug 2020
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8th Aug 2020 7:01pm
9th Aug 2020 10:33pm
Thank you so much souladareatease for the comfort of an embrace ... no words needed.
Humbled and honored by the add to your RL
Humbled and honored by the add to your RL
9th Aug 2020 2:56am
I was moved and drawn in, but when I reached the end, the bottom fell out for me and it really hit home. Your gentle candor is so endearing, vulnerability of the write is heart rending. I feel you. 💖
9th Aug 2020 10:37pm
Thank you so much Daniel for your thoughtful response .. always greatly appreciated ... as is the add to your RL,
Humbled and honored
JeJe♡
Humbled and honored
JeJe♡
9th Aug 2020 10:51am
9th Aug 2020 10:31pm
Thank you so much SweetOblivion for your thoughtful comments.. greatly appreciated
Some things in life cannot be fixed, they can only be carried.
Some things in life cannot be fixed, they can only be carried.
9th Aug 2020 11:43pm
It's the impermanence of it all that is at the heart of the human condition...love wrapped in a conundrum. Poignant and beautiful ink J.
Peace...Harry
Peace...Harry
So true Harry,
Thank you so much for your beautiful comments, and the taking for your RL ... greatly appreciated
Cheers
JeJe
Thank you so much for your beautiful comments, and the taking for your RL ... greatly appreciated
Cheers
JeJe
