I Burn

Love this piece. You are a great wordsmith
Ron x

It's an old Spencerian sonnet I  wrote for NAPO 20 in April. I have rewritten it a little and added a further sonnet I have played with this week and rewrote this morning to match the verse forms - needs some more work - but fit enough to present and maybe gather thoughts of others to help in that.

"I'll spew my thoughts in rock pools on dark shores" - S.O romantic

The mind crabs and the
starfish hate my vomited
outpourings so much

they know nothing

How did you get to know that close kept secret? They all have such aspirations to emptiness

:)  I know nothing

you are wise to admit to it

Love the flow of your thoughts as it consumes and capture the moment of sensual lust share by two souls connecting as one nicely composed dear poetess..respect

so glad you understand sir

I always enjoy reading your work for it has an connectivity all of its own capturing the deepness of the mind and heart and soul respect dear poetess and enjoy your day today

I like to feel the swirl of words slowly falling into place like a shower of autumnal leaves

Ahhh yes and you definitely do that and more as you capture the mood beautifully 🤗respect dear poetess wink with a smile 😎

this is more tentative and experimental - it is a pleasure to draw in the thoughts of others

Yes indeed it is dear poetess..respect 🤗🤛

Your respect is a valued commodity

Well received dear poetess I appreciate you sharing your thoughts on paper from the pen 😁😇🤗

Your literary talent is in gorgeous form here both as a sonnet of nature and womanly emotions and as a sensual poem of the psychology of a dom/sub relationship. Really fine work. Enjoyed immensely.

XoXoXo
John

Your immense enjoyment gives me immense pleasure