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Occam’s Razor is a Bitch
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my poetry reached out
for help
I’ve only met
a wall of silence
at a time when others
in this world-over
meet a wall
of punching fists
My distress
has been clear
Friends can hear!
The boldness of
the attack
on my speech
might terrify
but I know
I am in the right
We won’t back down
this is no fight
There are laws
to reference
...perhaps you see the light?
my poetry reached out
for help
I’ve only met
a wall of silence
at a time when others
in this world-over
meet a wall
of punching fists
My distress
has been clear
Friends can hear!
The boldness of
the attack
on my speech
might terrify
but I know
I am in the right
We won’t back down
this is no fight
There are laws
to reference
...perhaps you see the light?
Published 27th Jul 2020
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27th Jul 2020 3:53pm
Love the message between the lines of depth and deepness preaching the truth about friendship as it sometimes will be nothing more than an illusion of smiling faces hiding behind a mask as a disguise pretending to care yet uncaring at the same time respect brother poet 🤛
28th Jul 2020 00:25am
28th Jul 2020 00:46am
27th Jul 2020 7:52pm
Thank you for writing this poem, it has me thinking. Keep on writing, my goddess.
28th Jul 2020 00:24am
27th Jul 2020 9:19pm
Occam's Razor ... hmmm. People prefer simple explanations - and Hitler knew that too, plus the value of endlessly repeating a simple thought until people's psychology capitulated to the "new truth" (in his case of a superior race, thereby justifying the 'removal' of "lesser" humans).
Occam’s razor says you should be able to read this now. Thanks to the support team. But I don’t think you will see this response when logged out. Hoping that can be fixed, also.👍
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My hysteria/paranoia notwithstanding... I think the team is on my side.😄
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My hysteria/paranoia notwithstanding... I think the team is on my side.😄
28th Jul 2020 5:53pm
perhaps you might be right in light of things yet to come.
Wright On, Ed
Wright On, Ed
