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Follow your dreams
Real lies, I do not condone it
Time flies, savor the moment
Your mind flies, unless you dream and you own it
Where it lies is indeed where you've thrown it
Time flies, savor the moment
Your mind flies, unless you dream and you own it
Where it lies is indeed where you've thrown it
Published 27th Jul 2020
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8th Aug 2020 6:25am
Love this ... crisp ... original with the rhyming in the beginning and end of line ...
12th Aug 2020 5:49am
30th Jan 2021 11:36pm
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23rd Oct 2020 8:52am
Excellent internal rhymes Mike. You really put a lot of weight with few words on this piece.
Well done.
Well done.
25th Mar 2021 4:14am
