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Kibble and My Two Bits
Behold the witching hour.
Spells cast in the past
come back to haunt and
taunt a mind already weakened
by the long day.
Cats in hats bat at a face that's
been disgraced
they want food, they dont care
about shitty moods
so you're forced to get up anyways.
Mirror, mirror on the shelf
fuck you for making me
look at myself, I already
know who I am, I don't like
Green Eggs and Ham, give
me a bagel with everything.
Spells cast in the past
come back to haunt and
taunt a mind already weakened
by the long day.
Cats in hats bat at a face that's
been disgraced
they want food, they dont care
about shitty moods
so you're forced to get up anyways.
Mirror, mirror on the shelf
fuck you for making me
look at myself, I already
know who I am, I don't like
Green Eggs and Ham, give
me a bagel with everything.
Published 26th Jul 2020
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26th Jul 2020 5:36pm
"Mirror, mirror on the shelf
fuck you for making me
look at myself"
Self-reflection can be challenging and painful, but is often enlightening.
fuck you for making me
look at myself"
Self-reflection can be challenging and painful, but is often enlightening.
26th Jul 2020 6:36pm
I feel like the two most prominent undercurrents in my life are: physical tasks of the everyday mundane and intense introspection, with other shit mingled in. This poem sort of screamed at me. Nice write.
26th Jul 2020 6:40pm
28th Jul 2020 9:06pm
"bagel with everything" ... oh I haven't had that in ... forever ... nice sassy write dear poetess ...
29th Jul 2020 00:47am
30th Dec 2020 3:47am
This is the classic niki shit I love. It's clever and sarcastic and super full of colorful imagery. I can literally feel the annoyance palpable in the tone as well as the defiant indecisiveness that shifts between the high and lows of feeling depressed but also I just dont have the energy to give a fuck today because life stops for no one. Of course I read all your pieces when I log in but still. For me personally this a perfect example of what makes the way you approach writing unique and quirky. It separates itself from other stuff and the best part about it is that it's just naturally how you are. Always down to earth and honest. Just wanted to share that thought with ya. Write on my friend ~ keep your head up.
