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A Poem I Read

I don't know what to say about a poem I read today. But it's words lead right to my heart, every line was sharpen claws. And they tore at my soul. And my soul bleed out through my eyes. And my tears streamed down a invisible face.  And I began to drown in a sea of expression. Being pulled into the abyss of sorrow. As I began to sink, I had thoughts of a woman, and I could see the beauty of her face. And the brightness of her smile. And I remember the times I bashed open my brains, while laying in bed beside her. Revealing my secret shame, and my hidden thoughts.  And they poured out upon her, covering her in a sheet of shock. It was all over her face. And I feared that I would lose her, as I revealed to her things. That I would not reveal to God. But I loved her so much, and believed she loved me. So I fully disrobed and stood naked in the essence of my being.  I loved her fully as the glowing moon.  And she was my sun for surly I revolved around her.  So I told all and once my words flew from my mouth to her ears. I not only given her all my love. But the whole bounty of my trust.  Because this was to be my wife to be. So I held nothing back because I wanted her to marry me the hidden and the unhidden, the shame and the secret.  Oh I loved her so much, that I was a man that held the ignorance of a child. And I cry today a man. Because I read a poem, that revealed to me. I made a mistake. And my Revelation comes to me as I am drowning in the misery of day. Is I have witness the death of love.
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