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GOODBYE RIDE
You had on me
In the Hilton
Parking lot
Cherished odd angles
To proceed
From driver to passenger
To underneath
Your drunken lusty
Leather purse
Holding everything of value
We had stolen
From each other
In the Hilton
Parking lot
Cherished odd angles
To proceed
From driver to passenger
To underneath
Your drunken lusty
Leather purse
Holding everything of value
We had stolen
From each other
Published 16th Jul 2020
Author's Note
I still get lost in certain memories
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16th Jul 2020 6:59pm
'had' or hit?
There's a nice twist on that final stanza I wasn't expecting. This is steamy erotica done right.
I get lost in some memories too. I think we all do.
There's a nice twist on that final stanza I wasn't expecting. This is steamy erotica done right.
I get lost in some memories too. I think we all do.
Had, as in she had a goodbye ride on me
And thanks. I want all the sad romantic lusty memories. All of them. I think I am addicted to longing.
And thanks. I want all the sad romantic lusty memories. All of them. I think I am addicted to longing.
16th Jul 2020 7:03pm
Oh, the title is a part of the poem. Sorry. I guess because it was all capped I didn't make the connection.
16th Jul 2020 7:04pm
16th Jul 2020 7:20pm
16th Jul 2020 7:23pm
16th Jul 2020 10:25pm
What is it about fucking memories this week?! Every poem I read lately has been about memories of past love/sex/relationships!
Anyway, this is well done and I enjoyed it immensely!
Anyway, this is well done and I enjoyed it immensely!
17th Jul 2020 3:57pm
