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AWAKENING

HEROIN RUINS AND TOTALLY DESTROYS � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � �EVERYDAY LIVES, BOTH MINE AND YOURS. � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � REEKING HAVOC THROUGHOUT YOUR FAMILY, � � � � � � � � � � � � � � �ON YOUR WIFE AND CHILD AND ANYONE WHO IS HANDY. � � � � � � � � � �INDEPENDANCE, IHAD IT ALL. � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � NOT ANY MORE,IM PAYING THE TOLL. � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � EVERYONE WAS NEEDED WHEN THE TIME CAME TO SCORE,AT LEAST NOW I CAN SAY NO THANKS IVE BEEN TO THAT HELL BEFORE. � � � � � � � � � � � �NOT ANYMORE

Written by johnnymull

(john mullen)

Published 21st Jan 2012

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megovoni (Meghan)

22nd Jan 2012 5:05am

I really enjoy the way this is written across rather than up and down. The structure fits the substance nicely. I also really like the phrase "anyone who is handy". It's so true.