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When two forces collide
an enigma of adulation
captured before release
dressed down desert sand
paraded, in once forgotten land
makeup off of the monkey
and rising moonbeams put aside
eyes daring, dying only to see
out past the distance
where the water runs so free
I can taste her in the salt-tease
drying out for me
promises, no promises
ponderance
where one gazes
a pill of "what's it gonna be"
a lifetime of surrender
where desert never meets the sea
or a morning blowing in
amid songs of the red dawn
riding
an endless soothing breeze
captured before release
dressed down desert sand
paraded, in once forgotten land
makeup off of the monkey
and rising moonbeams put aside
eyes daring, dying only to see
out past the distance
where the water runs so free
I can taste her in the salt-tease
drying out for me
promises, no promises
ponderance
where one gazes
a pill of "what's it gonna be"
a lifetime of surrender
where desert never meets the sea
or a morning blowing in
amid songs of the red dawn
riding
an endless soothing breeze
Published 3rd Jul 2020
Author's Note
Inspired by the talented Talen
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3rd Jul 2020 4:03pm
3rd Jul 2020 4:45pm
i inspired this!!!!
O wow..............& You honor me by linking my spill to this incredibly spilled spill!!
Brother,
when i first read the title i was thinking about the
immovable object
meets up with the
irresistible force.
But what You have spilled is much much more !!
O wow..............& You honor me by linking my spill to this incredibly spilled spill!!
Brother,
when i first read the title i was thinking about the
immovable object
meets up with the
irresistible force.
But what You have spilled is much much more !!
