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20th Jan 2012 9:32am
Hmm, I don't really like the you at the end - other than that it's good. Just an opinion :)
20th Jan 2012 9:41am
20th Jan 2012 11:12am
The cycle of life what else needs to be said, it is what it is. Short and sweet.
Gypsy red
Gypsy red
20th Jan 2012 12:39pm
Anonymous
20th Jan 2012 8:01pm
I love this type of poem.
Self expression in short sharp images built to a thump.
That last line is perfect.
Self expression in short sharp images built to a thump.
That last line is perfect.
