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Confusing mind

A battle, chosen destiny
Ending fought, grimace helplessly
In joy, knight lancelot
My name, open pantheon

Quiet rule, steady tremor
Asked bold, coming dinner
Evening fog, gentle hold
Inner justice, king's load

Maddest night, open prayer
Quick rhythm, soft tear
Answer beneath, calling death
Every flaw, golden heft

I Jordan, karma leaps
My note, only piece
Quiz rushed, silent torment
All blow, calming dormant

Endless fear, graceful hand
Illest journey, kingdom land
Moment noted, open poet
Quill released, story told it
Written by CosiestPrism273 (Jordan Kunkel)
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Author's Note
I did a poem where I did every word in alphabetical order from A-T and also used rhyme. So ABCD would be first line then EFGH then IJKL then MNOP and QRST. After i finish a stanza i continue the alphabet so if the last line was MNOP I would start the next stanza as QRST. It was interesting and fun to do. You may not like it but I'm glad I wrote this. Thanks for any feedback and thoughts. That means a lot.
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