Eyes That Do Not See

Excellent, but very sad. The beginning is really good :)

Thank you very much for reading my piece and commenting.


Gypsy red

We are only blind to those who can not see. I shame beauty seems to be saught by eyes but only to feel it in the heart. Beautifully spoke.

Thank you so much my friend, I do so appreciate your sweet comments.

Gypsy red

A sad but soulful poem..it's a shame when eyes don't see the fierce beauty and love before them..excellently expressed..peace Crim

Yes it is a shame but such is life and for those that fail to see, they will know true regret.Thank you so much sweet Crim.

Peace, love and light
Gypsy red

There is no doubt in my mind that you are an excellent poet.  Your 4 part "The Quest" is exceptional.  In "Eyes That Do Not See, though, there is some temporal confusion in my mind.  Is 'the sorrowful day" you mention at the poem's end just a day, a long sequence of time, most of your life (thus a metaphor) or something else?  I like your poetry very much.

marcella1

First let me thank you for the wonderful and encouraging comment as well as your astute observation.  
 
It was just that, a day,(when you have to give up on something it is always sad)but it was purposely left open ended or up to the interpretation of the reader, kind of interactive so to speak, that way the reader can relate to it in whatever form he/she needs to.
 
I appreciate so much the feed back as well as the questions because they give me a better perspective on my pieces. Once again thank you very much.
 
Gypsy red  

Love your vocabulary. Even more your dancing with words whatever the theme. Your "Gypsy Soul" sees with clarity and is a shimmering light in a world of gray.

Thank you so much Mr. Ken,I tell you what I invite you to dance with me.